Tuesday, 17 February 2015

My Literacy focus : Removing the they’s we’s and I My intention : I want the reader to feel sad and sorry for the people in Karo


Thick smoke coming out of the mountain in the horizon caught my attention. In the first minute it looked wonderful, but then reality hit us. The smoke started drifting towards me. We put our masks on and just stared at it. It was terrifying and amazing at the same time.  Should we stay here, to be on the safe side or go and see if the town is safe. I turned to look at my friend’s reactions. They looked horrified. Why are such things happening in this innocent town?


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