Tuesday, 25 March 2014

What is success?

Success Criteria:
  • Title, Introduction, Explanation Sequence, Conclusion
  • Action Verbs
  • Present tense: is, now.
  • Time connectives: first, secondly,finally, then, when
  • Vocabulary: technical language

17/3/14                                                     What is success?

What is success?
Do you know what success is, who is successful, why and how they became successful?
There are many different types of success. Success is when you accomplish something and also do a good job.To be successful, you need to love what you are doing and pursue your own dreams. You also need to be happy with what you do to be successful.

Types of success 
There are many different types.One type is to be rich and famous just like Lorde , she was a really famous and rich singer. Another type is to gain a lot of luxury and status just like John Key, he is the prime minister of New Zealand and gained a lot of luxury. The third type is to create a better world for people and the future generations just like Steve Jobs, he founded Apple and created a better world for people.

Who is successful?
Steve Jobs died on the 5th of October 2011. Steve Jobs was successful. He created a better world for people and is rich and famous. He was the one of the founders for Apple. Apple was developed in 1977. He persevered to make a very useful product for everyone to use. Apple is a very famous product used by a lot of people in the world. Steve Jobs invented iPads, iPhones and a lot of other electronic devices. Nowadays, everyone carries an Apple product everywhere they go. It is the latest trend.  

How do you become successful?
You can become successful when you persevere to make things work. You have to choose what type of success you want and work towards it. Even if you are young, you can still work towards your goal. It can be what you want to do in future too. I want to be a doctor in future and I am learning some medical things from my sister as she is studying medicine. A lot of people become successful only after they have done a lot and have been determined to make it work.That is how people are successful.   

Finally, You are successful when you know who you are, choose who you are and be who you are. Most importantly, you have to work hard, love what you are doing and be happy to pursue your dreams. There are so many different types of success, go be successful in a way you want to be!


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