Tuesday, 25 March 2014

What is success?

Success Criteria:
  • Title, Introduction, Explanation Sequence, Conclusion
  • Action Verbs
  • Present tense: is, now.
  • Time connectives: first, secondly, finally, then, when
  • Vocabulary: technical language
  • Makes sense

Introduction - What is success?
Explanation Sequence - How can we be successful?
                                         - Nelson Mandela was successful  
                                        -  Why should we be successful?
Conclusion - You can be successful if you want to

                     What is success?   

What is success?
Success is when you make your idea becomes reality. That is how people became famous. They dreamed of being famous and if they make it true it means they were successful. But it’s not only rich and famous. There are lots more ways you can be successful.You can be good at dancing,singing,you can play an instrument,anything!

How can we be successful?
Firstly we can be successful by working really hard. Some people think that success is money, rich and famous. Well people are different so you might have a different idea of success with your friend’s idea.
When you are a teenager success is a good school/college,a new phone, a good job and lots of friends. When you are growing up you have different ideas of success.

Nelson Mandela
Nelson Mandela worked really really hard to achieve what he wanted to change in South Africa. He was born on 18 July 1918 and died on 5 December 2013. He was successful to sent the black people free,because he wanted to do it. Nelson was determined to help his country and to make it better for people to live in. He also helped the black people have rights of their on.

Why should we be successful?
Secondly we should all be successful at something. We should be successful,because you feel good after that. Also to make the world a better place. We should be successful at a job we like to do so we will enjoy and do work at the same time. We should be successful to make your soul bigger and feel good.

You can be successful if you want to

Finally, you can be successful only if you want to. You can make your dream come true!


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