Date 28.03.2014

WALHT write to explain
SC:Title, Introduction, Explanation Sequence, Conclusion

Action Verbs

Present tense: is, now.

Time connectives: first, secondly, finally, then, when

Vocabulary: technical language

Plan: Introduction: What is Success?

- different types of success: fame, money, power, happiness egs

HOW to be successful:

-getting things done/completing tasks - plan and following it

-collaborating with each other  - get help

-using the stonefields school learner qualities- getting out of the pit

- example of Bill Gates

conclusion: why are people successful? - they use strategies

What is success?

What success means is actually never quitting what you need to and the important thing is achieving the success. Success is very hard to achieve but there are many many people who I’ve seen on televisions and at stonefields school that had made big successes, and I believe that those people are all around us!

Different types of success

Success can be splitted into many different types. Many people have achieved success, but they didn’t jump way across the steps to go to success. To achieve success you must go step by step because if you just jump way across, then you will definitely get things wrong. Nelson Mandela was one of the greatest people who had achieved a big success before he had passed away. Nelson Mandela went step by step to achieve success. He had made a big change to South Africa. Nelson Mandela got to make a big change to South Africa because he had money. Money made power for Nelson Mandela. Later when Nelson Mandela achieved his success, he had happiness but not even himself, but all the South Africa people who was waiting for that day.

Getting things done

Getting things done is all about success too. When you're finishing off something and you think that you can’t do it and you give up, that is not what you call success. When you’re finishing off something and you have spended a lot of time on it and one day you finish off the project, that is what you call success. When I see around school, I see builders all ways collaborating with each other when they’re working. If the builders never thought about success, then they would have never been successful.

You might think that success happens when you complete a task but its not always when you finish a task, Success can happen during when your trying to complete a task because every paragraphs, sentences and words that you think of to write a successful story needs some successful words too.

Collaborating with each other

Collaborating with each other sounds like just helping each other, but it has a little meaning of success in the word collaborating. If you see on television, you will find sport players collaborating with all their teammates but its not always the sport players that collaborates, its all the people who makes it to success. Collaborating is not just helping yourself, but it actually helps others too. So collaborating and success combined together, can actually make many differences.

Using the stonefields school learner qualities

Using the stonefields school learner qualities is important because, the learner qualities takes you to the path that makes you achieve success. When I first came to stonefields school, I never knew a single word from the stonefields school learner quality chart, but later on, I learned every single word and the best thing was, I learned that stonefields school learner qualities can help you when you're trying to achieve to make success.

Example of Bill Gates

Bill Gates had been successful because he had tried very hard for years and years to be successful in his life. Usually, when Bill gates earns money, Bill gates donates the money with other people who needs money for their family. When the families gets the money, they use the money on computers or to buy windows programs for their computers. Amazingly the money goes back to bill gates then later bill gates donates that money again. So there is a big cycle of money that keeps going around, but Bill gates is successful by earning money and donating.

Why are people successful?

Success happens when that person wants to be successful or by another reason that connects to success. People are successful because they want to be successful. People use strategies to be successful. Strategies can help you to go to success because the strategies are the shortcuts. People want to be successful because they want to earn money. Every human being would do anything  to earn money, but first they need success. So there are many reasons why people wants to be success and earn money.