Thursday, 7 August 2014

Intention: I want the reader to feel amazed and scared Writing Focus: To make my writing interesting to read by adding language features

My skin was burning and my feet were wet when my eyes saw the marvelous scary view. Blistering hot with chilli, soaking making me feel all joyful, but still fearing it. Funny expression was on my face. Amazing. Fun. Something I never felt before. Boiling lava standing together with cool water seems almost impossible, magical. The sky was mad and angry at the moment. Mist all around me. I'm scared to think about what could happen next. I don't know what to do, I'm so confused. I just want to go back to where I came from but I forgot where I am. I just stand frozen. In the dark. All alone.


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