Intention: To make my reader feel delighted and calm. Writing Focus: To Control my sentences so they are short and long and I can make my writing flow

I sit there, remembering. The moment when I heard a wonderful song. Such a calming melody making my spirits lift up with my heart beating along with the rhythm of the song flowing into my ears.  It was totally miraculous! The beautiful harmony and tune made me feel untroubled and tranquil. I felt tired. Tired enough to doze off on the sofa with my mind clear. I stayed up. Not bearing to fall asleep missing such an incredible song! This was not just an ordinary album. It was very unique in its own ways. It had so much effect!  It was totally supreme, it made me feel so delighted and pleased to have listened to such a beautiful song! I really hope that miraculous moment could just come back to me right now.

Intention: I wanted the reader to feel amazed and relaxed. Writing focus: To Control my sentences so they are short and long and I can make my writing

I am strongly stuffing my Mouth with immense flavour while a miraculously odd and enjoyable feeling in spirits makes my feelings all joyful. My belly is amazingly following the blissful taste of paradise. I feel like simply wishing at a well that I can feel that amazing feeling again. I felt like I tasted a cloud. Touching my taste buds , is a soft and sweet taste. The brown icing making my mouth feel like chocolate.  Everything around me seemed to be in a half mist while I try imagining what could this magic possibly be…

Intention: To make my reader feel amazed and blessed. Writing Focus: To Control my sentences so they are short and long and I can make my writing flow

I am just astounded! The way everyone is motivated to learn with the guidance of some teachers is just unbelievable. All I see is the stunning and scenic scenery with the cheerful children and the grins on their faces, from ear to ear. Everyone is with a device in their hands, making it so fantastic for us to learn. This is the most marvelous and magnificent classroom to be in. The Joyful happiness of the children standing and running all around the place with their heads filled with numbers and clever sentences makes me feel like I am dreaming one really happy dream mixed with all of my thoughts. I feel so blissful and thrilled to be within this learning palace. I am sure everyone knows they are very blessed and fortunate to be in the most wonderful learning space ever!

Intention:I wanted the reader to feel amazed and happy.Writing focus:To Control my sentences so they are short and long and i can make my writing flow

I am stepping into a vast place, it is the favourite place of the most brood in all of the school. For a second it looks like a jungle in which a lot of endearing chimpanzees ascend. I really feel like I could just run in there and join them… There are loads of immense excitement. It is surrounded by foggy meadow and dry, but muddy land. I see smiles, actually blissful and uproarious smiles. There are diminutive and big children. It is simply amazing to finally stare at a place which I have heard of only in the stories.  I feel like I am just dreaming, my mind is in a whirl thinking about how real this could become.