Wednesday, 18 June 2014

I want the reader to feel relaxed I elaborate on each idea with more detail by adding or deleting for clarity

I hear birds tweeting while I'm walking across a thousand years old bridge. I can feel the breeze, fly into me like I am up in the blue sky. I see bushes and trees that has beautiful fruits that catches my eyes and drags me to it. I see lots of colours that shines into my eyes like a glass reflecting into my eyes. I feel the grass waving through my foot while I'm walking on the soil. It feels like I am at heaven. I wonder where I am.

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