tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519653141566030390.post345232936219766785..comments2019-10-01T21:56:14.110+13:00Comments on Learning Hub 3 2015 @ Stonefields School: WF: Use short and long line tension to make my writing flow and add supporting detail. WI: Make the reader feel worried and scared.School Apps Ownerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08629777795087603003noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519653141566030390.post-90008331642343820272016-12-27T01:04:52.422+13:002016-12-27T01:04:52.422+13:00I like this post nice information ,This is useful ...I like this post nice information ,This is useful to me <a href="http://thelearninghub.in/" rel="nofollow">check this for more info</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519653141566030390.post-7249866477965079842015-11-30T11:52:57.701+13:002015-11-30T11:52:57.701+13:00Hi hub 3 student , I liked how you used good sente...Hi hub 3 student , I liked how you used good sentences and described what heppened also I liked the juicy words that you wrote.Kushhttp://stonefieldstrivers.blogspot.co.nz/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519653141566030390.post-45490596394661191012015-08-05T10:48:53.659+12:002015-08-05T10:48:53.659+12:00Hi my name is Timeus and I am a year 5 student fro...Hi my name is Timeus and I am a year 5 student from Tamaki Primary school, I like how you use good description in your writing and explaining how you survived in the land, Next time try and write adjective's in your story. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8519653141566030390.post-70160139287045448792015-07-22T09:35:38.567+12:002015-07-22T09:35:38.567+12:00Well first of all, Hello my name is Mehi and I am ...Well first of all, Hello my name is Mehi and I am a Year 8 student from Tamaki Primary School. I LOVE the way you used the five senses to describe what you could smell, feel, see and etc. This piece of writing got me hooked in straight away and got me kinda feeling worried. I felt like I was in the story, I could visualise it all. But overall this was AMAZING and KEEP IT UP!!!<br /><br />-Mehi ;)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com